tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335247684247777194.post1873422733921436895..comments2014-03-14T12:03:32.903+11:00Comments on Antagonists Needed: Flash Fiction: A Recipe for Heartbreak Sianhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04150396669537102331noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335247684247777194.post-17280647402326619242014-02-03T22:58:44.744+11:002014-02-03T22:58:44.744+11:00@jenniferkweston - I think second person can work ...@jenniferkweston - I think second person can work quite well either when it's explicit(as in a letter or something to a specific "you"), or when it's barely noticeable (those pieces where you get about three quarters of the way through then go - hey, this is different some how, hand on...) Everything in between just sort of misses the mark, imo.<br /><br />I'm glad you liked it. :)Sianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04150396669537102331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335247684247777194.post-75613168905863900962014-02-03T11:47:28.048+11:002014-02-03T11:47:28.048+11:00Just wanted to add my voice to the appreciation. T...Just wanted to add my voice to the appreciation. The tone of this is so nice - the second person is very soothing. And, like the others mentioned, the twist ending is just stellar :)<br /><br />Great read!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335247684247777194.post-58069149948080926362014-02-02T17:08:18.045+11:002014-02-02T17:08:18.045+11:00@AJ Bauers - my pleasure, thank you for reading :)...@AJ Bauers - my pleasure, thank you for reading :)Sianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04150396669537102331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335247684247777194.post-88825740328090177692014-02-02T12:57:25.302+11:002014-02-02T12:57:25.302+11:00Great job - I love how this started off with the h...Great job - I love how this started off with the humor, slowly became straight, and then ended on a serious tone. Thank you for sharing!Janelle Reynoldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16143472121513219346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335247684247777194.post-9733912610975988752014-02-02T12:45:11.468+11:002014-02-02T12:45:11.468+11:00@thereallydivinemissm - I was quite fond of it too...@thereallydivinemissm - I was quite fond of it too. I feel I could have been subtler about it, but I wasn't sure how to get it across otherwise...<br /><br />Thanks for reading though :)Sianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04150396669537102331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335247684247777194.post-38075230210949096692014-02-02T12:37:25.712+11:002014-02-02T12:37:25.712+11:00"You'll have to ask your father about tha..."You'll have to ask your father about that one. He had a similar potion to this that he used on me. Right after I handed this one to him."<br /><br />I love that twist at the end.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335247684247777194.post-86702327482965760672014-02-01T10:02:56.278+11:002014-02-01T10:02:56.278+11:00Rebecca - I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Thanks fo...Rebecca - I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Thanks for commentingSianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04150396669537102331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335247684247777194.post-8616720334778163682014-02-01T09:55:43.968+11:002014-02-01T09:55:43.968+11:00Really nicely written. The tone is perfect.Really nicely written. The tone is perfect.Rebecca M. Douglasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07260530063164127746noreply@blogger.com