tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335247684247777194.post5929671187596726340..comments2014-03-14T12:03:32.903+11:00Comments on Antagonists Needed: Flash Fiction Challenge - More Than One Way to be Trapped.Sianhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04150396669537102331noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335247684247777194.post-69698571924684024262014-01-23T14:06:42.673+11:002014-01-23T14:06:42.673+11:00I'm glad you enjoyed it. I always do wonder if...I'm glad you enjoyed it. I always do wonder if these stories are going to work, because I pretty much spend about an hour and a half on them, and discovery write from start to end. So what pops out is what pops out. <br /><br />I think what I liked the most was how Donness still felt protective over his creator even though technically speaking, he should have been the one without power in the relationship. At the end of the day their power relationship was the opposite of what I would have presumed. <br /><br />I do wonder if Rowan knows what he's getting himself into though :DSianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04150396669537102331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335247684247777194.post-24201601899601597152014-01-23T11:24:00.606+11:002014-01-23T11:24:00.606+11:00I love this story... reminds me of a Will Smith mo...I love this story... reminds me of a Will Smith movie - but much shorter. :D<br /><br />And more intense. :)Mozettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16267731815392625679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335247684247777194.post-32830009826426245772014-01-19T23:33:09.533+11:002014-01-19T23:33:09.533+11:00@ underastarlitsky - I'm glad you enjoyed it.
...@ underastarlitsky - I'm glad you enjoyed it.<br /><br />@dangerdean - most of my characters seem to be broken in one way or another, but these ones even more so. It was a bit weird to read over it and think - these people came out of my head.Sianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04150396669537102331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335247684247777194.post-73574416732634744822014-01-19T17:57:30.261+11:002014-01-19T17:57:30.261+11:00Broken characters are the most fun! I enjoy when p...Broken characters are the most fun! I enjoy when people take on the sentience of artificial intelligence. Fun.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335247684247777194.post-80673616665499520152014-01-18T16:45:56.642+11:002014-01-18T16:45:56.642+11:00Very interesting. Really enjoyed thisVery interesting. Really enjoyed thisAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335247684247777194.post-1821610149368675332014-01-18T15:28:19.006+11:002014-01-18T15:28:19.006+11:00Thank you, both of you. I had quite some fun in wr...Thank you, both of you. I had quite some fun in writing it, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. My main characters ended up a bit more broken than I had presumed they would.Sianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04150396669537102331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335247684247777194.post-28957338567635033612014-01-18T07:43:39.816+11:002014-01-18T07:43:39.816+11:00Oh, how curious. I enjoyed this quite a bit.Oh, how curious. I enjoyed this quite a bit.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06722557426104272152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335247684247777194.post-52314577729405634292014-01-18T06:30:36.048+11:002014-01-18T06:30:36.048+11:00Very interesting take on the challenge. A fantasti...Very interesting take on the challenge. A fantastic tale, wonderful characters, and some great hooks in there. You did a marvelous job. Thanks for sharing this with us, much appreciated!Matthew Eatonhttp://www.mattheweatonwriter.com/flash-fiction-challenge-golden-green-pig-men/noreply@blogger.com